Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree?
As per the recent report by Hindustan Times, the average money spent on a wedding is approximately twenty thousand dollars per function. At present many people prefer to spend a large amount of saved money on their marriage arrangements. Some people believe lavish marriage events lead to many complications for the married couple. I completely agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, marriages with exorbitant budget often lead couples to financial crisis afterwards. This is to say that organising such functions require a lot of money to hire caterers, decorators and dress designers. Thus, the bride and groom often spend more than their budget in order to show off everyone. For instance, as per the recent news by Indian Express, one couple declared personal bankruptcy as they were not able to repay the loan they took for their wedding.
In additional to this, large functions goes up to few days and takes a toll on couple's health. These parties are organised in multiple small functions such as ring ceremony, cocktail party, wedding day and finally a reception to all friends and family members. The couple gets physically tired by attending such a long duration functions and get very less time to eat food properly. For instance, during one of my friends' wedding, the bride fainted as she was not having proper rest from last few days due to extended wedding celebration.
To conclude, although spending hefty amount of money on big and lavish marriage arrangements is in trend, I believe it creates more problems for the wedding couple such as financial burden and health concerns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...tional to this, large functions goes up to few days and takes a toll on couples he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0679245283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64494116705 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0789621219 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262346114414 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894756455105 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938056180815 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162494693414 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926219994099 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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