Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive.
To what extent do you agree with this?
Many people think that females are usually calmer as compared to males since their personality traits are biologically more loving than violent.
I partially agree with statement and I will discuss my reasons in the following paragraphs.
The main reason for this belief is that men have more testosterone than women. Since, this hormone is responsible for inducing feelings of rage
In humans hence, men easily feel angry. While females have lower levels of testosterone thus, they do not get vengeful usually. According
to a study conducted by Harvard University, it was found that 55% of people convicted for hate crimes were men.
There are other elements like environmental factors that affect people's temperament. This is to say that, if a person surrounds themselves with calm people then regardless of their gender they will adapt better behavioural traits from their company. Hence, If people expose themselves to a loving environment it will make them more compassionate. In a survey done by Toronto University, it was concluded that both men and women in a prison cell
improved their habits with the help of psychiatrist's assistance.
To conclude, many people think that males are more aggressive than females because of biological reasons such as testosterone composition. However, the environment also impacts a person's behaviour regardless of their gender. I am a female and when I am stressed I feel more rage than my friends who are men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e think that females are usually calmer as compared to males since their personali...
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Line 11, column 180, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...However, the environment also impacts a persons behaviour regardless of their gender. I...
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Line 11, column 296, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ressed I feel more rage than my friends who are men.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, while, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25106382979 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89425524876 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608510638298 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4109914729 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9230769231 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322795872739 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107735501014 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734067374191 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130263655558 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710903656117 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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