Cities are growing rapidly as population is increasing in every country. More people means more problem will arise, it doesn’t mean that smaller town has less problem. Individual city is having their own problem. There are quite lot of problems which are arising now a days. For example, education, poverty, environment and so on.
Let’s start with education, one of the biggest problem in my country. Children’s are not getting proper education during their childhood. Due to more population, competitions are getting increased each and every school. Also, now a days, private school fees are so high that medium income family can't afford it. Though they have talent, chances are very less.
Even if they get chance, unable to continue due to the financial problem. Another changes i have noticed in rural area that, if older brother didn’t get chance, parents think that younger brother also would not get chance. Due to all these, literacy level is decreasing which is a big problem in large city.
poverty, another daily lives problem in every city. More number of families are there whose income less than poverty level. People are getting into bad situation and they are trying to do bad things. For example, crime has increased a lot than past. One of the main reason for this is poverty. They are looking for money to run their family but they don’t have job to earn it, so doing bad activity.
other big issue, environment problem, major problem in our current world. Big cities are allowing all big industries to set up their industry to bring more work, money. i wouldn’t disagree with government, but these industries are not cleaning / maintaining the environment. Due to these, environment is getting polluted, people are suffering with lot of unknown. diseases. Also, people are using their own vehicle to travel, which are generating lot of carbon, polluting the environment.
Another problem, traffic, which is terrific now a days. People are not following the rule. For example, when i come to office daily, can see, lot of vehicles are going through the restricted area. No one is there to stop and most people are taking same route. Though, traffic polices are there in each traffic, unable to control it due to the huge crowd.
let’s talk about small town, in my opinion, small town means small area and less people. In spite of having less people, they are also having same kind of problems. In small town, people will have less opportunity compare to big cities. Getting good school would be difficult even having good talent. No of jobs will be lesser, will be difficult to get the job.
In the conclusion, i would not agree that people should move to small town as same problem will persist while more people will be moving. Instead, people should understand, what should be done to overcome those problems. without resolving problem, all cities will be same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 13.1623246493 266% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2453.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 496.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94556451613 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36062365958 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495967741935 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0721442886 230% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9191584691 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.2972972973 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4054054054 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16216216216 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 22.0 3.9879759519 552% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249716403194 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635155489976 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621705366862 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124597521067 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745831041323 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 71.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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