Recent time advanced technology has changed the way of communication drastically. Today more number of people are connected through social media such as Facebook, Instagram and what's app and they spend time with each other more as compared to many years ago. Many people opine that this type of connectivity is beneficial for them, however, others hold different opinion. Let us discuss.
To begin with, as the technology is growing the communication medium is also advancing by every passing days. There are many advantages being noted by utilizing these gadgets. First of all, the world has come very close and connectivity among the people has been increased so that virtual relationships such as making friends on Facebook, liking each other's photos, sharing videos and voice messages has increased. For instance: Nowadays people meet each other on social networking sites and they get married thus this has escalated relationships bonding. Another advantage is that school and college students can send important notices or messages through this medium,if they miss to attend classes. Apart from this, people can get instant information and any serious news, as they do not have to wait to read the newspaper on the next day or they do not have to sit in front of the TV. Additionally, people are connected through these networking sites to their distant relatives who are living another country and enjoy the talks.
On the flip side of it, many people believe that social interaction is also needed. Many years ago when there was no technology like smart phones and computers, people usually spent their time on recreational activities such as playing outdoor games, stitching, embroidery, playing indoor games and of course gossiping. These activities had improved their day to day communication and interaction skills so that their language proficiency was at peak. That is why many people think that face to face interaction is very much important. In fact, by interacting with other people, they can develop certain things namely, honesty, sharing, giving, integrity, truthfulness and mainly compassion for others. For example; Children can learn to share and give the things to their siblings in large family. Sometimes, they have to seek help from
others so that they have to interact with new acquaintances hence their team work and collaboration with new people can also be developed.
Conclusively, mobile phones and face to face interaction have their own advantages. I personally believe that both things smart phones and face to face interaction are very much needed. People cannot deny anyone in these fast growing world. It is recommended that people should use these gadgets wisely and with consciously not with compulsive state of mind.
- Some people argue that technological inventions such as mobile phones are making people socially less interactive Do you agree or disagree
- Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and Internet chat groups Some people think it is good Others think that face to face interaction is essential Discuss both the views and give your opinion 67
- Some people think that mobile phones are most useful for their professional life other thinks that mobile phones are most useful in their personal life Discuss of them and give your opinion 73
- Nowadays people make new friends through social media and internet chat groups Some people think it is a good idea Other think that face to face interaction is essential Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Some people argue that technological inventions such as mobile phones are making people socially less interactive Do you agree or disagree 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in fact, of course, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26410835214 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72885916451 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546275395034 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1616894545 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1363636364 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253626385317 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755616243777 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676920940653 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145706150334 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285061641779 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cation drastically. Today more number of people are connected through social medi...
^^
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...l media such as Facebook, Instagram and whats app and they spend time with each other...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nd they spend time with each other more as compared to many years ago. Many people...
^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Let us discuss. To begin with, as the technology is growing the communi...
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Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ual relationships such as making friends on Facebook, liking each others photos, ...
^^
Line 4, column 490, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et each other on social networking sites and they get married thus this has escal...
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Line 4, column 536, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they get married thus this has escalated relationships bonding. Another advantage...
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Line 4, column 673, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
... notices or messages through this medium,if they miss to attend classes. Apart from...
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Line 4, column 682, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'miss attending'.
Suggestion: miss attending
...or messages through this medium,if they miss to attend classes. Apart from this, people can ge...
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Line 4, column 941, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally, people are connected through these networking sites to their distant relati...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the talks. On the flip side of it, many people believe that social interact...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople believe that social interaction is also needed. Many years ago when there w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in fact, of course, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26410835214 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72885916451 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546275395034 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1616894545 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1363636364 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253626385317 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755616243777 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676920940653 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145706150334 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285061641779 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.