Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants.Why do you think people waste food? What are the measures to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
Food industry contributes 30% to the global economy. In today’s fast paced life, people usually eat out or take away their food, and end up wasting a lot of food. The reason for this insensitive social behavior and the possible solutions to curtail the food wastage is elaborated in the forthcoming paragraphs.
A recent study revealed that global food production is 40% more than the real consumption. Due to advancement in technology and implementation of scientific farming techniques, mass production of crops is rampant.Thereby, based on the economics of demand and supply, the food price drops, enabling consumers to buy in bulk. That is; rather than thinking of actual need people fall to the trap of buying more than they need, for instance, it is very common in most food joints to have offers like Burger at 5 dollars, but Burger with fries and cola at 4.99 dollars or even in supermarkets bundle offers like, 1 kg onion at 2 dollars but a bag of 5 kg onion at 5 dollars are promoted, luring customers to buy more. Considering the above points the prime reason for food wastage starts at the production line itself which is leading to misuse of the food.
Few measures to decrease the food wastage are, to educate the people on the larger issues like hunger in poverty driven countries, making children socially responsible, public awareness, large corporations to have control on mass production of food products, government bodies penalizing the establishments and restaurant/fast food chains for food wastage.
Finally, food wastage is a real concern in most of the developed and developing countries. Although, the source for the ill management of food is at the production level which is the top most level of the hierarchy, the solution has to be consumer driven who are at the bottom most level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thereby
...es, mass production of crops is rampant.Thereby, based on the economics of demand and s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0393442623 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9220822887 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.139030882 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.7 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2701265058 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119077206742 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760843670671 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1801178702 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777265988924 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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