Wasting a plethora of food is being a serious issue in this modern society. I think there are two reason leading people to this trend. In this essay, I am going to explain why the problem happens as wells as introduce some solutions that the authorities can consider to reduce the number of food that wasted.
Regarding the causes, citizens are wating their food due to two main reasons. Firstly, they are unable to finish their meals. For example, we can see so many people in the buffet restaurant could not finish the amount of food that they got. However, there is no one who want to consume the rest of them, so it will be thrown away, as a result. Additionally, the grocery cost is lower than the income of the residents much. For instance, Burger King sells a meal at 5 dollars that includes two big burgers and one big French fries while a basic salary nowadays is 12 dollars per hour, even there are other people getting higher wage rate at 100 dollars or more. Consequently, the food that they could not finish will be put into the garbage easily.
In terms of solutions, there are two actions that the authorities can take it consideration. Firstly, the government should run some programs to educate people why they should not waste the food, for instance, videos that show many needy people in Africa who do not have enough food every day. In addition, increasing the garbage collection fee is one of the effective methods that will help to reduce the amount of garbage. According to the report from Japan, the number of garbage reduced by 50 percent after they increased the collection fee by 20 percent.
To recapitulate, there are plethora of people who do not have food every day, so the authorities should educate people that do not waste your food as well as should increase the waste collection fee to reduce the amount of food that they could not complete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider reducing'.
Suggestion: consider reducing
...some solutions that the authorities can consider to reduce the number of food that wasted. Regard...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6377245509 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41946735781 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51497005988 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6280022567 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404704986766 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12173511061 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104634147583 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265809432389 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693969609302 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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