Nowadays, scientist can travel to remote natural environments such as the South pole.Tourists can also holiday in the middle of deserts and mountain anges. What are the advantages and disavantages of this development?
Ielts Task 2
In today's constantly changing world, needing a suitable life helping to ensure one's comfortable is becoming increasingly the particular needs of many people. In order to opportunities and threats relating to the current and future environment. However, this represent both positive and negative aspects.
One of the benefits of exploring distant natural ecosystem by scientist. The efforts of scientist maximise their reseach may have some benefits for society as a whole. When scientists can travel in the South Poles, besides they may have more revenue to explore in new things, including education, tourism and economic. One advantage is that tourists can enjoy their vacation in the middle of desert and mountain rages. They also can relax their souls after hard working and especially hey discover new places and expand cultural exchanges. Another benefit is that earning huge countries have the opportunity to grow.
On the contary, these explorations may results in serious environment. Because, if this place could be well knowed, environment will be contaminated by human. Another reason is that people visiting remote place and desert can risk where their trip. It's really dangerous, big problem such as unavailability of basic necessarities of food, water, medicines and so on. Moreover, climate changes can effects on their lives. The exploration might attract more tourists which destroy by human and lose its natural beauty and habitat
In conclusion, beside discovering and experiencing new places, people should protect enviroment and must conscious preserve beauty natural. I would argue that people should profoundly relect upon the natural environment.
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- Nowadays, scientist can travel to remote natural environments such as the South pole.Tourists can also holiday in the middle of deserts and mountain anges. What are the advantages and disavantages of this development? 56
- Nowadays scientist can travel to remote natural environments such as the South pole Tourists can also holiday in the middle of deserts and mountain anges What are the advantages and disavantages of this development 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...be more caring and sensitive than men. on the other hand, more workers must be tr...
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Line 4, column 480, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ey think that women should stay at home so as to cooking and cleaning house or they just...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, if, may, so, still, as to, for example, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64682539683 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45766305863 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8216716391 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0769230769 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373521805784 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140990121285 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896848450767 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259262292198 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590552385673 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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