In today's constantly changing world, needing a suitable life helping to ensure one's comfortable is becoming increasingly the particular needs of many people. In order to opportunities and threats relating to the current and future environment. However, this represent both positive and negative aspects.
One of the benefits of exploring distant natural ecosystem by scientist. The efforts of scientist maximise their reseach may have some benefits for society as a whole. When scientists can travel in the South Poles, besides they may have more revenue to explore in new things, including education, tourism and economic. One advantage is that tourists can enjoy their vacation in the middle of desert and mountain rages. They also can relax their souls after hard working and especially hey discover new places and expand cultural exchanges. Another benefit is that earning huge countries have the opportunity to grow.
On the contary, these explorations may results in serious environment. Because, if this place could be well knowed, environment will be contaminated by human. Another reason is that people visiting remote place and desert can risk where their trip. It's really dangerous, big problem such as unavailability of basic necessarities of food, water, medicines and so on. Moreover, climate changes can effects on their lives. The exploration might attract more tourists which destroy by human and lose its natural beauty and habitat
In conclusion, beside discovering and experiencing new places, people should protect enviroment and must conscious preserve beauty natural. I would argue that people should profoundly relect upon the natural environment.
- Nowadays, scientist can travel to remote natural environments such as the South pole.Tourists can also holiday in the middle of deserts and mountain anges. What are the advantages and disavantages of this development? 78
- Nowadays scientist can travel to remote natural environments such as the South pole Tourists can also holiday in the middle of deserts and mountain anges What are the advantages and disavantages of this development 89
- Nowadays, scientist can travel to remote natural environments such as the South pole.Tourists can also holiday in the middle of deserts and mountain anges. What are the advantages and disavantages of this development? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56862745098 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82234179817 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7264312247 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223355909678 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635359904033 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690039922419 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994374869437 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841040849811 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.