nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and the local community?
These days in many parts of the world the stores has been opened for extended hours almost every day of the week. Although it may have few adverse effects on the personal life of the owner, but in my point of view, overall it will be beneficial for both customers and society.
To embark with, there are many compelling reasons to believe that twenty-four hours a week retail store provide many benefit to the customer. Primarily, as a result of globalization, more and more people have begun to work remotely. Since this implies that they have flexible working hours, it could also be derived that they might often end up working at unconventional times of the day. Therefore, there is a shift in the timing that these professionals tend to devote to shopping. Hence, shops staying open throughout a week is a blessing for the service class people. Extended opening hours will definitely help to cater the customer needs more efficiently.
Furthermore, increase in opening timing has significant important for community growth. As sellers profit will be grow and they will be paying more taxes to the government, which can be used by the local authorities for various community development activities. Government plan the budget for every financial year and allot expenditure to different areas according to income received from different sources and tax is one of the major sources of income. Another advantage is an increase in the employment opportunities. Longer working hours would cause a requirement for more staff, thereby creating more job opportunities, For instance, employee are working in night shifts, so many will be able to find the job, thereby living standards will grow.
To recapitulate, opening hours of retail outlets are increasing in the current years and in my viewpoint, it also assist the local community to develop in many ways and contribute to the economy. Customers are also getting benefit from this trend with convenient timing for shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...-four hours a week retail store provide many benefit to the customer. Primarily, as a result...
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Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plans'.
Suggestion: plans
...nity development activities. Government plan the budget for every financial year and...
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Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Government) must be used with a third-person verb: 'plans'.
Suggestion: plans
...nity development activities. Government plan the budget for every financial year and...
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Line 13, column 115, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
...rent years and in my viewpoint, it also assist the local community to develop in many ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1450617284 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8034394225 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9896134116 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306906124989 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100819613501 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965841633852 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197597581899 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567577825352 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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