Nowadays in some countries, children are given fewer responsibilities compared to the past. Some people believe it is a positive development while others argue otherwise. Discuss both views. What is your opinion? Give some relevant examples from your own experience.
At present, a controversial debates possess regarding the responsibility of children has decreased from the past, which become a positive impacts. But other people presume it is not a good development. In my opinion, it is better to give more responsibility to children to develop a bright future or a humanitarian personality in each individual.
In few decades before, most of the children witnessed by wars, poverty, strikes for republic etc. so that these children had many responsibilities along with their education. and also a eldest child has responsible for money, food for the younger children in the family for day today life. So that the children worked hard for fulfill their dreams. hence these experience have a assets as well as they can manage any difficult situations in their lives.
On the other hand, nowadays, more families became a nuclear family and they gives more concentration to child education and future jobs. Secondly, some electronic gadgets like mobiles phones, newly launched multifunctional instruments leads to become more lazier, because, everything near to hand. Parents more concentrated to the education and other extracurricular activities such as some sports, some out door and indoor activities. So that parents could not forced to children for work. Moreover , most of the parents are workers so they spent money or purchase many unwanted items to their children, it may leads a child more dependent with gadgets than the past centuries.
In my opinion the children should know more about their role in their life, otherwise these children become a unsuccessful individuals and these kind of people could not face difficulties in their life. For example, In this era, many students committed suicide after received the punishment from parents and teachers or after the exam results. these happned because of acknowledgement or irresponsibility during the childhood. these children are not capable to overcome in such situations.
To conclude, it is a responsibility of parents, teachers, and society to provide a responsible personalities to county.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'debate'?
Suggestion: debate
At present, a controversial debates possess regarding the responsibility of...
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Suggestion: And
...nsibilities along with their education. and also a eldest child has responsible for...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...es along with their education. and also a eldest child has responsible for money,...
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Suggestion: the
...es along with their education. and also a eldest child has responsible for money,...
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Suggestion: Hence
...n worked hard for fulfill their dreams. hence these experience have a assets as well ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...n worked hard for fulfill their dreams. hence these experience have a assets as well ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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...eir dreams. hence these experience have a assets as well as they can manage any ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a asset' or simply 'assets'?
Suggestion: a asset; assets
...eir dreams. hence these experience have a assets as well as they can manage any difficu...
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...hese experience have a assets as well as they can manage any difficult situations...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
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Message: Use only 'lazier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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...ifunctional instruments leads to become more lazier, because, everything near to hand. Pare...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'force'
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...r life, otherwise these children become a unsuccessful individuals and these kind...
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... irresponsibility during the childhood. these children are not capable to overcome in...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'personality'?
Suggestion: personality
...s, and society to provide a responsible personalities to county.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37993920973 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12823569858 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8941276761 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162810278863 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531544982044 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416298675078 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941291150656 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539847939901 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.