Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education.
Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life?
Justify your opinion with relevant examples.
Graduation certificate, it is a certification after completing university studies, is a heated-up issue. At present, it is believed that the bachelor’s degree is an essential accreditation for people to have a fruitful future life, but there are many celebrities who do not have educational qualification. I partially agree that the having a university`s degree is important, but the success does not depend only on the gained certificates. This essay will discuss firstly, the importance of high education, and secondly, the other factors such as skills and talents which can lead to a successful person in his career, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Having an accreditation from a reputable university or college is important for many people, and it is an essential target in their life to start their career. Currently, local job market is very competitive, and companies set a special qualification in their job posts; therefore, people should be ready for such competition by acquiring recognized qualification from prestigious universities. For Example, successful career for any employee depends on joining a mega company and be promoted through his tenure where google is the dream company for any IT engineer, and they look only for qualified employee.
On contrary, university certificate is a factor of success, but there are many other keys should be taken into consideration. Many celebrities get their fame from their skills and talents, and they have only completed their elementary school or have no even any educational certificates. The talent play a pivotal role in their career. For instance, several football players become very famous because of their talent in playing football where in Liverpool club, Mohamed Salah becomes a public figure and awarded the golden shoes last year; however, he did not complete his college.
To sum up, we can not deny that university education is one of the imperatives, but skills sometimes are considered as an exceptional factor for success. People should set their goals based on their talent and passion, and then they can decide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tion. I partially agree that the having a university's degree is important, ...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'engineers'?
Suggestion: engineers
... google is the dream company for any IT engineer, and they look only for qualified emplo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35735735736 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14508620596 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6036241463 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.230769231 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184819767908 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067002984586 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478794266977 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121098804763 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452081194769 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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