Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Control on waste has become a difficult job. These days we are manufacturing more quantity of waste and it is getting accumulated on this soil. This essay will discuss why the rubbish is getting produced and what state should do in minimizing this rubbish.
In this modern world, the human consumption is increasing wastage on the earth in a drastic way and the level of recycling or destruction is very low, therefore results into the accumulation of rubbish. For illustration, Plastic is used in almost every packaging material of food to keep the product intact and healthy such as water bottles and its demand is raising every day. Astonishingly, the produced plastic is non degradable item, hence making conditions even worst for the society in minimizing this rubbish.
In order to control this hazard, the state should restrict those organizations to produce the limited amount or to upgrade the quality of product. For instance use of bio degradable plastics, which can be controlled with the help of microbes. In addition to that, alternatives to such products are more appropriate such as, packaging of water in paper boxes, like tetra packing of milk and milk products. Although, the cost of the product will increase, the waste can be eliminated to some extent.
In conclusion, the world is producing rubbish in huge quantity because of the demands of these products are high in this modern world. Therefore the government should persuade companies to produce other alternatives to stop the formation of more garbage. In the near future, if some steps are not taken quickly we may have to face adverse impacts in the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07720588235 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81332167928 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2202097403 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232958999903 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783626758496 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711822883666 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144998841711 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586024107228 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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