Nowadays, we can watch entertainment performances from the screen and no need to watch them live. Do you agree or disagree?
It is certainly true to say that in this modern era, everything is available at home, whether it would be an entertainment source or an educational activity. Some people believe that nowadays, they do not feel the need to go out for amusement purposes. On the whole, I agree with this assertion; however, I also believe that live performances bring exceptional happiness.
Technology has made the lives of people much easier and convenient as compared to the last decade. This is because nowadays these people can watch multiple programs on television or the internet and can enjoy them in the comfort of their home. For example, many shows such as dance, comedy, quiz and so on, would act as a source of learning and as well as of enjoyment. Therefore, one does not require to go out for these activities.
Moreover, working people can even record their favourite shows in order to watch them in their leisure time. In other words, due to the hectic lifestyle of some people, they do not get sufficient time for their entertainment. Nevertheless, the advanced screening functions made it possible to watch any kind of show anywhere since timing is no more a barrier
On the contrary, some consider that watching live shows gives next-level fun. To illustrate, many sports fans are thrilled to watch live performances of players, especially in cricket and football leagues. Hence it is believed that live performances are also good to watch.
In conclusion, watching live shows is a great form of entertainment, still it requires one's time and commitment to go for that particular event. In contrast, the luxury provided by the shows that are telecasted on television is outstanding because of the convenience provided by them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, as well as, in other words, on the contrary, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03460207612 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89233205273 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1055444452 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8571428571 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283788650386 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902103104372 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070382878837 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144697058661 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528539428448 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.