The number of older people is rising. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?
What are the advantages or disadvantages of this?
In this modern era, due to vast development in medicine and science, we can able to see that longevity of a person has increased widely, leading to the elevation in the number of aged people. Absolutely, it is a beneficial factor for substantial people, however, there are also some drawbacks.
To begin with, living with the elder person at home gives an incredible advantage for the younger generation. Aged people have gained plenty of valuable experience in their lifetime, which will be a fruitful example for the adults and teenagers. As an example, elders have more concepts about home remedies during the medical emergency. It will be more useful for the young parents who need to deal with their newborn when they are sick. Current generation can get advice about the old customs that are mostly forgotten by youth. Moreover, many youngsters is moving towards the wrong path due to modernization, in this condition elders art home can show them the right path with unconditional love. Furthermore, when both the husband and wife are working they can be relaxed at work while leaving children to their parents.
On the other hand, in the fast-moving trend, spending enough time or taking care of elders has become the additional task for several people. Also, a plethora of older people, stop working after the certain age it’s a huge effect for government to provide pension and medical allowances which can be utilized for growth of the country. Additionally, they themselves feel lonely at some point of time, as a result, it leads to the mental pressure and unnecessary thoughts.
To sum up, despite all the disadvantages, its responsibility for every child to take care of their parents. Also, the government should update their laws so that both the younger and older people are benefited.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02657807309 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71577158141 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617940199336 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3885362959 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10677262433 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337210821772 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295962722682 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590543153426 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144974249254 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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