The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for this growth in overweight people in society. How this problem can be solved.
There is a significant rise in the count of people, those are at the edge of having major health issues because of their heavy body weight. Before providing the solution for this problem, it is imperative to discuss the root cause behind it.
There are various reasons leading to people being overweight. Firstly, people nowadays are living sedentary lifestyle. This is to say that they are not involved in any kind of physical activity which can burn their calories. Secondly, people eat lots of junk food which leads to obesity. This is because fast food is easily available in all cities and the cost of such food is also not high. Such food does not contain any vitamin or minerals, rather it have adverse ramifications on the health of consumer. For example, as per the recent report by Delhi medical college, 35% of the diabetes cases happen due to the regular consumption of interested food such as burger and pizza.
Two of the many solutions to this predicament is encouraging people to do more physical activities and increasing the taxes on junk food. Firstly, government should conduct campaigns to spread awareness about doing regular regular exercise to curb the problem of obesity related diseases. Secondly, government should increase the taxes on the fast food products so that people can not purchase such food items very often. As a result, demand for unhealthy junk food will decline. For instance, a similar initiative was taken by Germany in 2001, when they increased the price of cigarettes and it resulted in 61% decline in cigarette's sales.
To conclude, sedentary lifestyle and eating junk food are the major reasons behind increasing number of people obesity problem. I believe government should spread awareness about adapting healthy lifestyle, and increase the taxes on fast food items to eradicate obesity problem. Even I gained weight due to eating unhealthy fried food, which resulted in high blood pressure. However, I was able to improve health by doing regular exercise and eating healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: regular
...mpaigns to spread awareness about doing regular regular exercise to curb the problem of obesity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09281437126 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56059450063 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547904191617 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0680512502 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211334037048 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736261496416 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714358688964 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129939627656 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310458814451 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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