Technology is a term which is being widely used in almost every sectors of our life. Currently we are witnessing an outburst of technological inventions, each and every day new inventions are being introduced in this sector. As result of this our traditional job pattern has been changed. Multinational companies are encouraging its employees to work from home, with the advent of technology everything can be done through the internet. Like every technology it also has advantages and disadvantages.
When we speak about advantages, i think it's better to start with convenience factor. It is very helpful for woman employees who has the responsibility to take care of their kids especially toddlers. They can easily manage both of their life from home easily.Moreover, when people work from home, they feel more relaxed as compared to their office. Everyone is more comfortable in their home conditions, so they do't feel that much pressure. Furthermore, work from home also offers flexibility, staff can do their work any time of their preference. They do't need to circle around their office table the whole day.
On the contrary, there are also some disadvantages too. Firstly, sometime they don't really feel they are working when they sit their home and does their duties. Eventually people may loose their concentration and that will reflect in their work negatively. Secondly,for some jobs like marketing it can not be possible, employees who works in this field need to go to the customers and talk to them about the business. Lastly, punctuality is the one of the main characteristics of an employee. So a fixed schedule of work should be followed, it only possible when they are at home.
To recapitulate, work from home is an life changing concept. But it can not be applicable in all the cases. whether it is good or bad for the employees is still a controversial issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ns are being introduced in this sector. As result of this our traditional job patt...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ges. When we speak about advantages, i think its better to start with convenie...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...age both of their life from home easily.Moreover, when people work from home, they feel ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sadvantages too. Firstly, sometime they dont really feel they are working when they ...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...oes their duties. Eventually people may loose their concentration and that will refle...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...flect in their work negatively. Secondly,for some jobs like marketing it can not be ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
.... To recapitulate, work from home is an life changing concept. But it can not b...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whether
...can not be applicable in all the cases. whether it is good or bad for the employees is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, i think, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03184713376 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99887736443 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7946642001 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227799042731 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696892006679 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637258840564 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141463874344 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240135546491 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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