obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem . Provide your specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent past years we could see lot of discussions going on different health issues, and one of the major one is obesity, mainly in wealthy countries. With the advent of popularity on ready to eat food, people from busiest countries showing more interest though it is not healthier and hygiene. After the deep analysis on what are the root causes for obesity and why people from riche countries effected, providing few possible ways to ameliorate the obesity epidemic.
To begin with, rich countries such as UK and USA spend more money on their food. For example, people in USA spending 6 times more than India which indicates their economical strength. Secondly, as people more productive in matured countries, they won't have adequate time to spend on cooking therefore they look for junk food and ready to eat type of food; of course, its not healthier and they are aware of it. Finally, people not much bother about their deteriorate health conditions because their government provide most of facilities.
However, all above given reasons are just reasons. From the statement, "where there is will, there will be the way", if people become conscious about their health, epidemic obesity can be easily ameliorated. Firstly, local government should instigate to let people know the importance of health and it can be possible from school syllabus. Secondly, government should make people responsible to their health by abolishing free health schemes. Finally, government have to increase tax rates on fast foods so that food manufactures prioritize on healthier food.
To recapitulate, it is conclusively clear that government have to take bottom line to see healthy and prosperous people in coming generations and public support also required t his great initiation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the busiest'.
Suggestion: from the busiest
...popularity on ready to eat food, people from busiest countries showing more interest though ...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...d ready to eat type of food; of course, its not healthier and they are aware of it....
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the facilities') or simply say ''most facilities''.
Suggestion: most of the facilities; most facilities
...itions because their government provide most of facilities. However, all above given reasons...
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Line 9, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sible to their health by abolishing free health schemes. Finally, government have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, of course, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29020979021 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72809741879 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.259878203 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.384615385 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791485808676 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028879895591 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327001176368 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501208706763 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357485271689 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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