The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.
The elder generation share their old beliefs about the way people should live, although some believe these are not useful as nowadays our values about life have been changed. Old traditional thoughts are valuable but in my opinion, in these days younger generation does not seem to care enough about this.
Our grandparents used to tell us a lot of stories about their life and their old beliefs. Most of them have had hard life due to wars and separation of families. This is why they are trying to take extra care of younger generation to keep them safe and telling the main conviction that needs to be followed. It is believed, that to be with partner then you need to be married or work hard then comes the love. For example, in old days people used to marry and live with the same partner for the whole life. Although, it makes sense, the new generation has broke these viewpoints.
Younger generation values about the life and behaving have changed a lot. In these days people are relaxed, living day by day and do not think about what is coming tomorrow whereas people before planned their lives and future ahead. For example, travelling around the world, having kids in later age and marriage has become optional. Also our manners have changed, when people before had a high respect to older people, then now youngsters are even a bit disrespectful. In addition, in old days people lived with the whole community together and did not leave the country whereas nowadays as soon as child is 18 years old they try to do everything to move separately.
In conclusion, over the time the values of the life have changed, these things that were important in old days are nowadays in totally opposite way. In my opinion, the younger generation is much more relaxed and easy going.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a lot. In these days people are relaxed, living day by day and do not think about...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...r age and marriage has become optional. Also our manners have changed, when people b...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s are nowadays in totally opposite way. In my opinion, the younger generation is m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74522292994 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43243729347 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6688976752 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309299238932 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105952902324 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765341024161 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201341789021 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700352894764 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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