One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Technological advancement has played vital role in medical science and due to that people are living more with better health. The phenomenon of hike in number of old age people has demerits as some people think it is economic burden on nations, however I strongly believe that merits of perceptual growth of life span are abundant.
To begin with, ultra modern amenities help out in augment of long living life which always helpful for next generation as young people attain profound advice from them. Additionally, long life expectancy create more researchers, lawmakers and writers who can aid society to make people living life with ease. Moreover, youth cherishes great life is gift from their parents and guardians, and by increasing life they can contribute more in society. For instance, Japan has the highest rate of life expectancy even though on positive note they are leading in economic growth as well as in healthy lifestyle in entire world.
However, some people opine that more numbers of old people are burden on society as they can not do hard and productive work. Economic growth will less affected by long life and by taking care of them nations can waste enormous energy on them which create slump in growth rate. Time and energy both can not use properly by nation to ameliorate situation in under developed and developing countries.
In recapitulation, improvement in life span of any country receive great efforts from knowledgeable old experienced people.Medical advancement become blessing on human being. I firmly deem that, advantages of life expectancy are innumerable than its disadvantages
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- Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Medical
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21755725191 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77204625302 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9515750811 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198329875558 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766492812818 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033575635178 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117651050161 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390790662763 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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