Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefit that it will replace face - to - face education. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
In the contemporary era, due to the advancement of technology, there are various resources of learning and are developing by an alarming rate for the facilities of folks. Internet, the biggest asset for the people of the twentieth century, is spreading roots in every aspect of life and is playing a vital role in the education system. Few have an opinion that it has ample advantages by learning online and it will make a permanent spot in oncoming days, whereas others believe that nothing can take the position of face-to-face learning. In my perception, I firmly agree that learning by conventional methodology has more pros than e-learning and I will shed some lights on both the field of vision in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, education is not only about to acquire a knowledge of limited curriculum but it teaches other basic things like – discipline, respect, values, and many more and a pupil can learn all these things only under a tutor and it is next to impossible learning these categories through the internet. For instance, in a class, there are a bunch of students of distinct behavior and a learner can learn different things by dealing face-to-face. Moreover, a teacher can guide them about any particular problem in the easiest way or also give the solution about the problems on their daily basis.
Moving further, learning under expertise going through various stages and evaluation is one of them and it is totally negligible through e-learning. In addition to that, a pedagogue can aware the students to pull an all-nighter before the exams and the students who have the habit of a ditch the classes can give attention to their study. Additionally, some educational institutes give a full ride to the brilliant students and it motivates them for achieving more in their future. On the other hand, internet can give you knowledge only in a typical manner and it can’t elaborate in simplest form or can’t explain you by a lecture-cum-demonstration method.
Put in a nutshell, as it is rightly said that “education is not preparation for life, education is life itself”. Therefore, gaining knowledge about each and every feature of life is a complete education instead of becoming proficient only in a particular material. Online education can give comfort zone to someone for learning but not make him/her capable to survive in the society.
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| 2019-02-09 | Ravi Grewal | 91 | view |
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
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Message: Consider replacing "in a typical manner" with adverb for "typical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the simplest'.
Suggestion: in the simplest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by a lecture-cum-demonstration method. Put in a nutshell, as it is rightly said...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, you know, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07575757576 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07538021602 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537878787879 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4389026887 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243079864049 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832219526364 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542007362806 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150304803524 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489975646664 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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