Organised tours are choosing more and more to go to remote places and communities. Do you think it is a positive or negative development to the local communities and environment?
Tourism industry is flourishing by leaps and bounds and many tour operators are now organising the trips at the unexplored areas to enjoy the nature. While I believe that this trend has benefitted the local communities, it has certainly caused a damaging impact on the environment.
To begin with, with the increasing popularity of tourism, more and more people are allured towards exploring the remote villages or the faraway places in the outskirts of the cities. Hence the guided tours holds such trips where tourists can enjoy the nature to the fullest. This development has clear advantages on the local communities. Firstly, this approach gives rise to many small scale industries aiding in their earning for livelihood. In other words, local vendors get their source of incomes through the tourists in an otherwise struggling life. Secondly, many people would get the jobs in the tourism related industries in the local area, for instance, in the hotel business, eventually boosting the local economy. Furthermore, cultural exchange is the key aspect of the guided expeditions in such remote villages where many minor and unrecognised communities are existing.
On the other hand, the environmental impacts of the organised tours at the countryside or remote areas can only be seen as negative. Tourists exploit the natural resources. Additionally, people have to cut down trees in order to set up the market or accommodation facilities for the visitors, which leads to the deforestation. Visitors are also responsible for increased litter and garbage which fills up the lands.
To conclude, I believe that tourism to the remote places has far more merits to the local people and communities, despite of certain drawbacks. If the tour operators as well as visitors acts responsibly in order to preserve the natural environment of the locality, then it is certainly a positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... places in the outskirts of the cities. Hence the guided tours holds such trips where...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for instance, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28712871287 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92617393078 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0369829033 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231018161063 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704863993918 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666921010008 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136223847127 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697121076133 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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