Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is major problem. What are the cause of this? How can this problem be solved?
Employment and educational opportunities in abundance are acting as a catalyst for the mass migrations of youths from rural to these urban hotspots. The rise in the concentration of population is attributed to economic prospects offered at every level in across most business sectors. This essay will discuss the potential causes of the population burst in downtown and recommended approach to address the concern with both tactical and strategic viewpoint.
Flourishing job market in the capitals have forced millions of youths to abandon the native hometowns and embrace chaotic city life. Further, City councils tends to sponsor multinational powerhouse to establish their footprints with the objective to earning corporate taxes to fund the annual city budget. For instance, Facebook recently acquired 20,000 square feet of office space at subsidized rates by city council, resulting in moving thousands of jobs into already overcrowded Manhattan in New York City. Thus, the rise in population figures across urban areas.
State government needs to step up and formulate the governing bodies to monitor and scrutinize the brain-drain at rural levels. In addition, they can offer incentives to enterprises for embracing remote working culture as an interim solution. In the long-term, they could set up a consortium of public and enterprises to offload the jobs to tier II towns and promoting local hiring. For example, Texas state government intertwined a bill in house to fund and develop cyber parks for enterprises in the suburban thereby relieving stress to already saturated Houston city. Hence, a strong guiding principle along with timely enforcement may be the key to curtail the menace of overpopulation.
In conclusion, plethora of job seeker moving to big cities is an invitation to disaster and stress to resource management. Setting up the governing council with guardrail to dissect job location to satellite town is holistic long-term approach to solve the problem and encouraging local hiring is also recommended for overall development of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47352024922 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.969829495 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629283489097 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5407348642 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0602878728858 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019283679842 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259333415007 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0369527778917 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216327750736 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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