A lot of people claim that massive population growth of urban areas has its unfortunate consequences. In this essay I will outline few major problems of that question and suggest possible solutions to them.
The foremost issue of the overpopulated city is an increase of produced exhausted fumes. The more dwellers are in the city the bigger number of cars can be seen on roads. Not only does it lead to highly trafficked roads, slows down the travel and event turns it to a standstill during peak hours, but also it contributes to environmental pollution. This problem also affect citizen`s health. For instance, medical institutions in towns that suffer from this issue report increased number of cancer diseases and asthmas. Another striking problem of densely populated towns is that beautiful city skyline turns into concrete jungles. Enormous number of high-rises, multi-storey car parks, supermarkets, business centers, all that give the city an ugly face. Therefore, dwellers of towns that have that issue state that they are more stressed and have increased level of anxiety.
I firmly believe that these problems should be tackled by rigorous legislation because there is little than can be done by individual. Firstly, governments have to provide residents of the city with modern and reliable public transport system. Given this situation, the local council then can charge drivers for using roads in downtown. Also, local politics can make parking meters in the center of the city of a high price. All above measurements will stimulate people to use public transport more. Consequentially, traffic volume will drop. Considering second issue, it is strongly recommended to prohibit to build new constructions in historical areas and move residential areas to further suburbs. Taking into account above two aspects, and also if these suburbs are served by modern highways, the downtown will be no longer an attractive place to live in. As a result number of new buildings will be reduced.
In conclusion, I believe that overpopulation of urban areas has some severe problems that cannot be neglected. Although there are various ways to tackle these problems, I am of the view that they can be solved only by law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84404836652 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605555555556 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7479424014 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4285714286 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134675237579 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360673380133 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481328538361 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100996323176 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771715836534 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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