Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
Indulging has become a common parenting problem in numerous families.From my perspectives, this practise can exert a detrimental impact, adverse repercussion reverberates in adulthood.
There is no doubts at all that the majority of parents pay ample attention their children, they are sure in advantages of these actions, however, consequently, toddler's process of learning the basic skills are delayed, this can be seen in a variety age group of children. For instance, a majority of parents feed toddlers by spoon until five or six, in this development stage when they have been able to eat independently. Another example, adults assist their preadolescent children in taking a bath or a shower . As a result, children may fail in acquiring basic personal skills allowed caring about themselves at the right time.
The consequences cannot be positive as over-indulged children grow up , if parents satisfy all the need, they may make their children inadverntenly over-related on other people. When their children enter in adulhood , the inability to live independently causes difficulties in maintaining overall well-being; for instance, they may be unaware of what to do when they catch a fever . Furthermore, it is a norm that over-indulging parents frequently face the consequences of misbehaviour of their children. In general, this deprives children of opportunities to make their own mistake, and get a lesson , which aid them in the future.
In conclusion, over-indulgence can produce a number of unfavourable effects, including the delay in gaining critical life skills, such as self-feeding, and a consequences of lacking the ability to cope with problems as adults in the years to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in general, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41509433962 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3350222059 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8291142685 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3231598086 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118820313262 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979381097021 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148357847395 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13966530161 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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