In an era when technology is being infused in all aspects of lives, it is common for students to access a wide range of information online independently on the Internet. Personally, education is much more complex than that, partly requiring teachers to guide their students through the educational process.
On the one hand, students nowadays can freely search thousands or even millions of sources online thanks to the searching engines like Google. In other words, it is now relatively easy to access up-to-date information on practically any subject imaginable with the Internet, often with pictures, video clips, and audio to accompany them. Therefore, most of them may find it significantly convenient to self-learning without lots of help from teachers. Plus, they could have plenty of time to acquire knowledge more proactively and have a deep understanding of it. Moreover, it could be a considerable stepping stone for the current students to practice information retrieval skills before completely standing by themselves in the high-competing labour market in the future.
On the other hand, there is much untrustworthy information not being thoroughly reviewed by academics. Consequently, many students may get wrong insights about online materials if they do not have any teachers' instruction regarding material selections. For instance, some websites are established for viewers attractions or experience purposes only. Furthermore, education is about the trust and bond between a teacher and students that creates an environment where learning can occur and grow. Indeed, good teachers inspire lifelong learners, creating an independent inquiry culture with enthusiasm and passion.
In conclusion, students have abundant ways to research information, and I believe that teachers always keep an important position to transmit helpful knowledge to students.
- The diagram shows how chocolate is produced 11
- The graph below gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010 78
- Computers do help children to learn more effectively On the contrary their usage has a negative effect on both the physical and mental development of young people To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Computers do help children to learn more effectively On the contrary their usage has a negative effect on both the physical and mental development of young people To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The diagram shows the process of making orange juice 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...nline materials if they do not have any teachers instruction regarding material selectio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71071428571 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11912917923 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667857142857 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0238343191 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207189109223 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659993016916 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356342328679 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122706953776 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253914003281 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.