in the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in this area.
what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
these days, almost all the people in the small village have a different characteristic from big cities in social life because life in a mini-community has a lot of benefits. in the past, there were advantages and disadvantages to living in a small community.
I believe that in a small city have a lot of benefits. firstly, citizens had a good society that gave some attention with society and gave impact to decrease many problems. in addition, they easier to make a discussion group because they always surrounded by their relatives. however, life in little citizens could make a negative attitude.
my, assume many of the disadvantages were knowledge. firstly, citizens only had a little tuition because only little of citizens who they knew. this is can be imparted to interpersonal skill because that is the key to be a success person only had limited friends if they live in a mini-community.
in conclusion, I believe that generally, every people need each other to help out them from something problems. on the other hand, lived in a mini-community become to be the focus to the activity, so they should cause who is a good person for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8578680203 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98275079216 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553299492386 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6297754445 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210108784003 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849890045883 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854809737488 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129531952123 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732836389581 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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