In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby.
To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
Nowadays, shopping sits high on our to-do lists whilst in the past, it was done as a task. From my perspective, it has both positive and negatives ramifications which will discuss in this essay.
In the one hand, there are several demerits resulting from being shopaholic. The first and for the most, doing shopping as an entertainment activity n free time will make people be more consumer day in, day out. People would buy everything without paying attention to their necessity so that they finaly be caught in the middle of huge useless products. Indeed, people use a meager picking as a means of supporting their lives. From my personal experience, I always repent from my shopping when I go shopping without any definite goal. In addition, indulging in shopping leads to squander money. According to statistics, people who are always buying items recklessly, have struggle to meet end every month. Since they finally will be invoiced with a huge expense, they money will be tight at end.
On the flip side, there are obvious argument in favor of shopping as a relaxing activity. Firstly, it makes shopping more of a pleasure than a chore. It causes people to be more enthusiastic n buying. Eventually, the more passion for shopping is, the better items will be bought. Secondly, shopping helps to take a weight from people’s mind at least for two hours. People are accustomed to go shopping with their dear and near ones like their families or their friends, so they would have an amazing time during shopping time with no doubt. Would dare to say that there is noting relaxes me as much as shopping.
Inconclusion, these days people are shopping as a pleasure activity rather than a compulsory duty that was inspected in the past. It seems to me that, this change of lifestyle has both disadvantages like use to buy unessential products and waste money as a consequence and also advantages such as being eager on shopping and also making terrific hours with our loves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'struggled'.
Suggestion: struggled
...re always buying items recklessly, have struggle to meet end every month. Since they fin...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to going', 'accustomed to gonna'.
Suggestion: accustomed to going; accustomed to gonna
...mind at least for two hours. People are accustomed to go shopping with their dear and near ones ...
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Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...f lifestyle has both disadvantages like use to buy unessential products and waste m...
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Line 4, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o making terrific hours with our loves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, at least, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85250737463 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65375591292 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575221238938 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2241833543 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5789473684 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166252616393 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550283572093 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466876985593 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123600744049 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444640640394 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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