People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of problems? How to overcome it?
It is true that work-life balance is something that most people want to reach. For most people, however, hard to success in both. This essay will outline two main reasons behind this situation and a range of possible solution to mitigate the problem caused by it.
Firstly, to demand the material needs, all most companies force their employee to work overtime, to maximize the profit. Therefore, many people could not spend time for their love ones or recreational activities. Furthermore, over work could lead people to some health problem such as stroke.
Secondly, a lot of parents willing to handle heavier workload to earn more money, as they believe money could enhance the standard of living and safeguard a better future for their children. On beside, we currently live in a materialistic society where people associate valuable possessions with a higher social status. Thus, running after property, people tend to spend most of their times in working instead of on other aspects of their life.
This problem can be mitigated by adopting a variety of measures. Enterprise should facilitate for their worker to have times for themselves and their family. For example, enterprise should offer longer paid annual leaves to enable their staff to alleviate stress. By traveling for a short time, worker can refresh themselves and be ready when they back to work. In this way, they could mend the bond with their family, and extend circles of friend, they can work for living while enjoying their lives.
In conclusion, work-life balance mainly results from overwork to pursue material values. I argue that we can tackle this problem by spending times for ourselves and our love ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12230215827 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.472204574 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622302158273 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9061164527 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218414883582 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775124991749 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505083224405 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128984622746 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398778888869 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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