In today's scenario modern societies are often resembles with drugs and alcohol. Due to this status show off, sometimes youth try and experiment using different kinds of illegal drugs. When they are not allowed or unable to arrange that, they try their substitute legal drugs. What they learn from their parents and family members they try to mimic that is same way.
In modern societies culture, drugs and other illegal ingredients have become indispensable part of their life. Parents often use these in front of their children which influence them and they also try to adopt the same way. Major cause of these situation is also the busy schedule of parents and their family members. Parents do not control or watch what the children are doing in their day to day life. Life style of family members also give wrong impression in their children's mind. Normally illegal drugs are not available to everyone or it is too hard to get that for teenagers that is why they start using legal drugs to fulfil their requirement.
High use of drugs in early age results in bad heath as well as loss of the ability to grow in academics. Continue use of drugs leads to criminal life and most of the teenagers fall in criminal activities due to drugs only. Parents also lose control to their children when they do involve themselves in such kind of activities. Getting illegal drugs is a daunting taks and due to that youngsters do involve themselves in lawless activities which leads to abominable life.
In conclusion to avoid dreadful future children, parents should have intense control to their children's activities. Whatever is their life routine they should avoid using alcohol and drugs in front of children. Use of drugs is always not suitable for any society, using illegal or legal drugs or any other substitute would lead to despicable future of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88643533123 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42407214107 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473186119874 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2847866997 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1176470588 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239819872144 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915790500032 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725626611678 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157407884882 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128585246666 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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