Majority of people in modern society use drugs, but young people nowadays are testing both legal and illegal substance. It is argued that parents and other members of society serves as bad examples for today’s youth, specifically with the use of legal and illegal drugs. This essay will first discuss the causes and effects of consumption of drugs to the youth and what necessary actions are needed to stop the misuse of drugs.
Peer pressure would be one of the major reasons for drug abuse. Children tend to seek attention and acceptance from their friends, not knowing that these group could actually harm them. For instance, to be considered part of the group, they need to prove something to them first. Forcing them to try and take the substance, subsequently this group could also use them to sell it to others. This will further lead to more deeper problems like crime rates or robbery. Another cause of drug abuse would be familial factors, it may be due to parents are too occupied with work or simply no parental guidance for this young people. Parents or responsible adults plays a big part in looking after the welfare of their kids. But sometimes due to too much work they are not able to do so. In particular, children who are often neglected by their parents have the tendency to be rebellious. And one way of doing that is by taking illegal substances.
Helping the youth to fight drug abuse has been a lifelong journey in the society. Ensuring that they won’t end up with the wrong group of friends is one of the first step for this. In the Philippines for example, majority of those caught for using illegal drugs are underage. Another possible solution would be shorter work time for parents. Less work hours means ample time to bond with their children. Some countries have been practicing this kind of work life balance and it yields positive results on both parents and children. The leader of the country also needs to make some course of action on this matter. If the society sees a great leader, then there’s a great probability the rest of the country will follow. Again in the Philippines, the current president has been very aggressive on handling drug abusers and pushers. Tho it is argued that his choice of punishment is very violent, but if it serves it purpose then he will pursue it.
In summary, misuse of illegal drugs could obviously lead to more serious and dangerous issues. Parents and the society in general have a big impact in developing and protecting the youth. Solutions and recommendations to this problem is attainable and should be taken into action by the leader of the country. Individuals and the government should work hand in hand to ensure the safety of today’s youth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'deeper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: deeper
...it to others. This will further lead to more deeper problems like crime rates or robbery. A...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hours'' or 'hour's'?
Suggestion: hours'; hour's
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Message: Did you mean 'purposes'?
Suggestion: purposes
...nt is very violent, but if it serves it purpose then he will pursue it. In summary,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in general, in particular, in summary, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 474.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78481012658 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45747901703 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7559914564 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236188209949 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616329228374 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768323059581 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173902475418 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118826502165 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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