people attend college or university for many different reasons (for exmaple, new experience, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, attending colleges is becoming popular in our society. Certainly, people are considering learning at universities more valuable than they were before. However, there are more than one reason motivating them to be a students. In this essay, I will discuss several causes of this tendency and support them with examples.
The purpose of preparing for their career seems to be the first reason why people go to universities. In fact, learning at universities is the best way for a person who have to find job in the future. Specifically, although there is a huge number of recruitments anually, but there are many jobless people all around the world. It is because of the fact that the knowledge and skills they have is not academic enough for them to satisfy the employers’ requirements. Therefore, the more carefully they were trained, the more easily for them to find a job. On the other hand, learning at universities, people would approach not only great scholar in but also academic and numerous material in their fields. Therefore, it is a great chance for them to enrich their skills needed for the future’s recruitments.
Last but not least, universities bring people chances to have new skills. Actually, attending colleges, many people have to deal with many problems that they have never faced before: accomodation, assigments, seminars, working in group... Therefore, they have to get more skills to overcome, such as dicussing, argueing or even searching on the Internet. For example, my classmate told me that if he did not become a student, he might never know how to use Microsoft Office. I think university changed his life for the better.
In conclusion, I think the above reasons are the most popular causes motivating people to attending colleges. Thanks to these advantages, universities will have been an ideal choice for people in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13268608414 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90554696414 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7561050952 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309502773522 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096637806339 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582070818674 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191686699852 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367952991874 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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