People naturally resist making changes in their lives.
What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
Change is the only constant factor of life. However, many till date are wary of change and often even refrain from making changes in their lives. This essay would enlighten upon the issues people face while accepting a change and even come up with a few solutions to help people gracefully accept the change.
The most evident reason as to why some people abstain from any change in their life, job or even age? Simply because, any and every change in their belief comes in with a lot of unsurety as well as insecurity. For, people can never foresee. whether the change is for their better or for their worst. So for this reason they possibly believe in playing safe and desist from accepting any and every change. Like for instance with the advent of technological advancement, the government of India took pragmatic measures by introducing large scale computerisation of all Government offices that had met with a lot of criticism initially and people had revolted against this transition saying it would lead to large scale unemployment. However, the government proved the people wrong by creating more job opportunities for skilled people. Moreover, millions of job seekers have benefited by this path-breaking change.
There are many measures that can be adopted to make the transition of the change a little less traumatic for a person who fears change. Like reflecting upon the benefits that could be derived by adopting to that change. Even before introducing a change. For example, the Indian people were implored by the government to start using sanitary napkins in place of rags for mensuration purposes. In the initial stages, it was simply considered as a wasteful expenditure. Hence, had not met with so much success, but with celebrity endorsements, campaigns and medical camps set up by the government, making people aware of the advantages of a sanitary napkin in place of a contaminated rag, seemed to play on the psyche of the people. Of late at least 70 percent of rural India has also registered their faith in using Sanitary napkins. So if a change has to bought, you have to make a person count the benefits, that change could bring in a person’s life
To sum it up, change is an inevitable aspect of life. There are many concerns faced by a person while accepting a change. However, with positive measures we could successfully introduce change in a person’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whether
...ecurity. For, people can never foresee. whether the change is for their better or for t...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... be derived by adopting to that change. Even before introducing a change. For example, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94567901235 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76179655208 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513580246914 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0556953681 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.380952381 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188248541072 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595892505226 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516788344676 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120593196474 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536238472642 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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