In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
Youth is the future of a Nation. In certain parts of the United States, teenagers cannot go out after a particular hour of the night without the supervision of an adult. In my opinion, this seems to be a totally uncalled for harsh measure adopted by the government on the teenagers ever growing need for freedom. In the following essay I would further elucidate my claims with cogent validations and even present a reasoned conclusion.
The most compelling reason for me in support of my stance is that America has always been known for its liberal outlook. Parents of USA also understand the teenager’s mind-set and therefore inculcate in them values of independent thinking, and simply out of the box thinking and therefore it could come up with great prodigies like for example, Bill Gates of Microsoft corporation, Mark Zuckerberg the founder of Facebook, Stevie Wonder the famous Singer songwriter cum musician are all from the USA who have Got one thing in common they were all brought up by open-minded and permissive parents, who never clamped their wings and let them create their own path which is till date treaded by millions.
Another valid reason in support of my stance against the night curfew levied on teenagers doesn’t serve the purpose of even reducing instance of crime. Simply according to criminal’s notion the time of the day may not be of any importance. For example, children who want to take to drugs, looting, juvenile sex, knifepoint mugging, street violence, date rapes etc. can happen at any time of the day, according to a Gallup survey. U.S. Schools Have Already Faced 10 Shooting Incidents in the Year 2018 and A quarter of U.S. parents fear for their children's safety while at school. So according to me these measure is way too regressive for a progressive Nation like USA.
To further encapsulate, I would like assert upon the need that rather than restricting the freedom of the burgeoning youth we need to equip the youth with proper self-defence lessons in case of being accosted by any ruffian and the authorities should also come with stricter laws against felons of major crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95277777778 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72705778006 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.218738693 49.4020404114 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.153846154 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160067310124 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543388809104 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618831269427 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087858929393 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559839852236 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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