People now a days work hard to buy more things. this has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
It is certainly true that the current life style of the people has evolved drastically towards luxury life. Actually,people are affording to purchase extra things which they are not in need . With this kind of attitude, they are getting compromised with the roots of tradition and culture values. i firmly agree with this proposition here.
firstly, individuals are busting their busts to afford costly items in order to get self satisfaction.They perceive that purchasing luxurious things brings them a certain acknowledgement of respect. They feel proud for their possessiveness otherwise they d...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...They feel proud for their possessiveness otherwise they do feel lost in society. ...
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...ay of communication to talk each other. they stand for ones feelings.One of my frien...
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...ting letter instead she pings me seldom.This example illustrates how human beings ar...
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...hips have greater importance to play in ones life. But, they are no more have value,...
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...of product to make money. To illustruate , in education wing, nursery child charg...
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...nd materialistic possessions. Finally , I think that craving for materialistic ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3593220339 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01592882353 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664406779661 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4736269019 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174059509921 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564511654041 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461981135619 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914179522101 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630981114269 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.