People now a days work hard to buy more things this has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...rastically towards luxury life. Actually,people are affording to purchase extra things ...
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... extra things which they are not in need . With this kind of attitude, they are ge...
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Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... roots of tradition and culture values. i firmly agree with this proposition here...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rmly agree with this proposition here. firstly, individuals are busting their b...
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Suggestion: Firstly
...ly agree with this proposition here. firstly, individuals are busting their busts to...
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Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...items in order to get self satisfaction.They perceive that purchasing luxurious thin...
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Suggestion:
...They feel proud for their possessiveness otherwise they do feel lost in society. ...
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Suggestion: For
...otherwise they do feel lost in society. for instance : Letters are traditional way ...
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Suggestion: They
...ay of communication to talk each other. they stand for ones feelings.One of my frien...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tion to talk each other. they stand for ones feelings.One of my friend whose backgro...
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Suggestion: One
...ach other. they stand for ones feelings.One of my friend whose background is very p...
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Line 2, column 526, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: She
... purchased a mobile worth of Rs.10,000. she stopped writing letter instead she ping...
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Line 2, column 574, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'seldom' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ped writing letter instead she pings me seldom.This example illustrates how human bein...
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Suggestion: This
...ting letter instead she pings me seldom.This example illustrates how human beings ar...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...hips have greater importance to play in ones life. But, they are no more have value,...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of product to make money. To illustruate , in education wing, nursery child charg...
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Suggestion:
...ake money. To illustruate , in education wing, nursery child charged with huge ...
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Suggestion:
...n education wing, nursery child charged with huge amount worth of Rs.1,00,000. t...
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Suggestion: This
... with huge amount worth of Rs.1,00,000. this cost leg and arm for a middle class fam...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd materialistic possessions. Finally , I think that craving for materialistic ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3593220339 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01592882353 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664406779661 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4736269019 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174059509921 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564511654041 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461981135619 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914179522101 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630981114269 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.