You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter,
tell him which team won
describe the conditions on the day
say how you felt about the mat
Dear Ms.Sudha,
I heard that you met with an accident on last Sunday. Iam sorry for that, i hope you are recovering.
First of all, here is the good news to you. Our red bulls team won the kabadi match with green chillies team and awarded with a momentum.
However the climate is very cloudy and there was a slight rainfall due to which the ground was little muddy on that day. Floor was slippery to step in. It is a very bad climate.Anyways, inspite of all bad circumstance around us we could do all our best to the level to win the match. I was astonished at the praises and blessings by the audience.
Let us know the discharge date and time by you. So that we could arrange transport facility to the hostel.
We all wish you speed recovery.
Best wishes,
priya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms.Sudha, I heard ...
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Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sudha
Dear Ms.Sudha, I heard that you met ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms.Sudha, I heard that you met with an accident o...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms.Sudha, I heard that you met with an accident on l...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ent on last Sunday. Iam sorry for that, i hope you are recovering. ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for that, i hope you are recovering. First of all, here is the good news to y...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es team and awarded with a momentum. However the climate is very cloudy and t...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... awarded with a momentum. However the climate is very cloudy and there wa...
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Line 8, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Anyways
...ry to step in. It is a very bad climate.Anyways, inspite of all bad circumstance around...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aises and blessings by the audience. Let us know the discharge date and time ...
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Line 10, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...now the discharge date and time by you. So that we could arrange transport facility to ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nge transport facility to the hostel. We all wish you speed recovery. Best ...
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wish you speed recovery. Best wishes, priya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, however, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 641.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45138888889 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43589690874 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673611111111 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7683249853 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.4166666667 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196987346058 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661298870614 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689018888434 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102660975677 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897057860531 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.64 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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