People should work a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this
give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. write at least 250 words
The need to be the industry leader makes the boxes every day want to get more results in a short time with the same staff what it does to ask their employees to work more hours, but It is not acceptable.
People deserve to have a job where their rights are respected; for that reason, the workers signed a contract that mentioned the hours and the pay. When a person works, more hours can suffer from stress and other illness that decreases performance. Also, We do not have to forget the employee's relationship and the time we need to share with family and friends.
In my personal experience, when a box asks me to work more hours is stressful and disrespectful. Also, for me, when this situation happens is a lack of organization of the leader; the team has to be goals during the day to accomplish in the established hours. It is so vital to me need enough time to rest. I have the right to choose how to spend my time off the company's schedule when hired me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...nce. Also, We do not have to forget the employees relationship and the time we need to sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38888888889 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49960490705 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594444444444 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9857314827 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115200654214 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511300589873 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459638278119 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795469418416 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00658080415004 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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