Nowadays, more people around the world start to suffer from sleep deprivation. This particular disease can cause an enormous amount of side effects. Before talking about those effects, we need to concentrate our attention on the main reasons for this problem.
First of the line is technology. With the develops of this, people spend a huge part of their life checking the news, writing messages, downloading and skimming apps. It is studied that the long-time use of devices as personal computer or telephone can cause at the users a dependence and for this people are pushed to cutout time from "sleeping hours" for spending them for the social or games. Second, is the busy life the new generation has to struggle with and have to control. People try to carrying a giant amount of commitment and a person may start to sleep as less as possible to manage all of that.
It is well known that those causes can have several collateral effects for the individual and even for society. People who are always tired are more likely to have trouble making immediate decisions and can cause like this mistakes during study and work. Furthermore, sleep deprivation can create a loss of interest in social life, pushing the person to avoid people and outside environments. This can lead to even more serious illnesses like anxiety and depression in some cases.
In conclusion, the loss of sleep is one of the most dangerous pathologies of our era. It must be recognized and fought as soon as possible, studying methods to limit it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, as to, in conclusion, talking about, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90804597701 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65156245615 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4287912083 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204164169405 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649946852599 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595147524548 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111032753089 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426738678657 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.