People spend too much on family celebrations such as birthdays and weddings?What are the importance of these celebration?Do you think people really spend too much?
Celebration and Birthdays are very important in human life as it is memorable and pleasant time for people. In 21st century, schedules are hectic and people have no time to spend with his family and friends but birthday and weddings gives the opportunity to meet each other and enjoy the time. Actually I do not believe people spend too much time and money on birthdays and weddings.
Undoubtedly, with the pace world is moving, it is hard to keep in touch with everyone and many close relationships are on verge of break-up. In such harsh world, celebrations are seen as blessings. On the occasions like birthdays etcetera, people do get together and celebrate day. Hence such days make the bond between families and friends stronger and lasting. Further more, certain family celebrations such as those to honour a recent graduate may also spur and inspire other family members to reach similar heights of achievement.
Admittedly, huge amount of money is spent on such days. But mathematically, plethora of amount is recovered in the form of gifts. On such days, visitors brings gifts which are very much useful. For an instance, On House warming parties, guests bring decorative gifts along with them which are use to decorate their homes. Apart from that, restaurants and various food outlets give discount when they are booked for celebrations.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, it is clear that such days plays an important role in everyones lives and they must be celebrated as expenses are lower than expected and gift always cherish the people
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birthdays'' or 'birthday's'?
Suggestion: birthdays'; birthday's
...een as blessings. On the occasions like birthdays etcetera, people do get together and ce...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ople do get together and celebrate day. Hence such days make the bond between familie...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...orative gifts along with them which are use to decorate their homes. Apart from tha...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...orative gifts along with them which are use to decorate their homes. Apart from tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03088803089 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62887017435 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6207013667 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332044893917 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10282456024 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100582855793 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17851358864 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103981036825 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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