You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Ask for some suggestions for what to do
Find out if there are any local events happening at the time
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to gain some information about the accommodation and various events going to happen in the Phuket in the month of December as I will visit the town from 14th Dec to 25th Dec..
First of all, I would like to know about the type of accommodations available in the town. I would like to stay near the beaches and villas will be my first preference as I will visit my friends and we would like to stay together. Secondly, from the internet, I came to know that there are plethora of sports activities available in the town. Please share the details and expenses of the activities which are open in the month of December. Lastly, we would like to enjoy our Christmas Eve . Therefore, I would like to know about the local events happening around the Christmas.
I would like to urge you to send me the details at earliest so that we can plan our holidays in the proper way. I will be glad if you provide me other information which should be in my knowledge before travelling and during my stay in the town.
Please revert at earliest.
Sincerely
Abhishek Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...visit the town from 14th Dec to 25th Dec.. First of all, I would like to know a...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. I would like to stay near the beaches and villas will be my first preference a...
^^
Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...we would like to enjoy our Christmas Eve . Therefore, I would like to know about t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54228855721 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52991609418 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52736318408 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2264769757 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124050392682 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451229531904 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04190385161 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855389956348 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466720600012 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.