People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays people experience uneasiness and insecurity whether they are at their own house or out on the streets. Various factors play a role in stirring such feelings in individuals. In the following two of the most prominent ones will be introduced and finally probable steps that can significantly resolve the issue will be proposed.
The most obvious reason that robs the sleep from anyone's eyes at night and disturb their peace is undoubtedly the strikingly rising crime rate and violent behavior. The number of robberies, burglaries and even homicide has increased alarmingly over the past decade. It seems that no one is safe anymore even at school students fall victims to hateful terrorist attacks. Therefore, it is not hard to see why so many people are even afraid of their own shadows! In addition, there are news about criminal activities everywhere, on the news, the internet and even social media. Although a responsible citizen must always be aware of its surrounding to act accordingly, this influx of terrifying news on different media has detrimental effects on the society since it makes people feel insecure all the time. Sometimes journalists exaggerate the impact of an incident which they are reporting so that it makes the headline. Furthermore, catastrophes, such as terrorist attacks and human trafficking, take the largest portion of the news, which gives the impression that there is imminent threat near us.
To address this problem some measures can be taken. Firstly, government needs to pay attention to eliminate the causes that persuade people to turn into violence and become a criminal. For example, poverty is one of the reason that contributes to juvenile delinquency and aggressive behavior. Consequently, one can reduce the number of adolescents choosing the wrong path by providing promising opportunities for them such as free college education and stable employment. Additionally, media should be regulated to broadcast the news with much more care. For instance, by verifying the magnitude of the event and the its possible influence on the viewer before announcing them to the public. Besides, it would be beneficial to see some good news about successful environmental activities to preserve the endangered species to just cheer people up.
In conclusion, there are various factors which contribute to people feeling not as ease even at the safety of their own home. Nevertheless, none of the problems are insurmountable and as mentioned above can be alleviated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3184079602 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95988961132 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601990049751 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1113734116 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.526315789 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1578947368 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63157894737 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133223751962 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387956271848 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401533226701 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928528293971 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032882617235 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.