Millions of people have migrated from their home country to other countries in recent years.People who move overseas, experience traditions, culture and customs which are very different from their own country.This essay will discuss why I completely agree that people who shift to live in foreign countries should respect and fathom the local ethics and traditions.
Firstly, the main reason why it is essential to practice the local customs is,because it will be convenient for people who have moved voluntarily to a foreign country for living .To illustrate, it will be more easy for one to find a job and earn money which is very essential to survive .Localities are are more welcoming if you respect their culture and adapt their customs which will further lead to lot of growth opportunities for an immigrant.
In addition to this, adhering to the rules and traditions values by the immigrants, will make them more acceptable socially which is vital for living a peaceful life.For instance, if immigrants are celebrating the local festivals with same enthusiasm like localities, they will be happily able to make new neighbors and friends who can be there to guide you better to live in a new place.
To conclude ,this essay discussed why people who shift abroad to live should adapt the traditional customs of that foreign country because it will help them to find jobs and be socially accepted by localities .In my opinion, I completely agree that immigrants should follow the rituals and traditions of the country they move to live their live peacefully .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0694980695 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74211888443 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525096525097 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.2304910553 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 328.25 106.682146367 308% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.75 20.7667163134 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 7.06120827912 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239655139093 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161431079998 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630386871128 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161431079998 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630386871128 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 13.0946893788 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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