Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of hand and sea .some people think they should be banned .do you agree or disagree?
Rampant usage of polythene bags for all kinds of retail purchase has invariably lead to heightening halting their usage is mooted by some people.This essay strongly agree to the above statement and will discuss the reasons in support of this view.
Firstly,plastic that is artificially made by chemical process is not 100 percent recyclable.It is very difficult to decompose it because of the high toxic levels.This in turn leads to hampering of soil quality due to large dumping of heaps of plastic bags.
Similarly,marine life has shown lot of decline due to massive dumplings of plastic.This all has affected food chain and plastic has entered in our bodies.For example,in a recent study by united states government public welfare department,it was found that 90 percent of Americans have close to 2 percent of plastic content in their bodies.
Secondly,Usage of plastic shopping bags is more of unhealthy habit.State and local government and municipalities should encourage public to use eco-friendly fibres like jute and cane.Infact,Today technology has led to innovations in high strength and light weight bags made by corn fibre.Political drive should be their to offer soaps and capital to produce viable alternatives with economies of scale to diminish the cost.In addition to this,retailers should incentivize customer to bring on carry their own bags to encourage the reuse habits.
To conclude,Plastic has already affected human lives in negative way and as we have other options available with us ,it is justifiable that we should consciously stop using plastic in routine and look forward to a healthy future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.359375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26106140457 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.816779617 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 274.4 106.682146367 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.2 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8 7.06120827912 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140688906306 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649133217171 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386522003173 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649133217171 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386522003173 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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