Politicians’ private lives shouldn’t be published in news papers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is always argued whether the media should reveal the private lives of the politician’s or not. Many people claim that the public has the right to know any details related to the politician, while I believe that a public figure’s private life should remain confidential.
In the one hand, every individual has to enjoy confidentiality, and politicians are not an exception from this rule. To illustrate, apart from the political arena, a politician is a regular citizen who needs to enjoy private times away from the spotlight in order to have a normal and balanced life. In addition, if the press constantly invades the privacy of the public officials, some worthy candidates may be discouraged from running for any public office. Hence, the community would lose valuable opportunities to benefit from such candidates, as no one would like to have their financial state, health problems, or relationships disclosed.
On the other hand, those who advocate publicizing the private life of politicians claim that these politicians have put themselves into the public sphere intentionally; moreover, they might be using their private lives to promote for their campaigns. However, I believe this thought is ill-founded owing to the fact that unless the private lives of the politicians are negatively affecting the way they lead, there is no need for intruding their zone of privacy. In other words, citizens should criticize public officials for their public decisions; therefore, they must have information that would enable them to judge how well officials are performing their jobs. That is why in some countries, France for example, there is strict legislation to protect public officials’ private lives.
To conclude, despite the existence of some opinions in favor of the action of publishing the private lives of politicians in the media, I reiterate that they owe the complete right to live a normal life away from the media pressure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, in addition, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26517571885 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98133571497 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1081345397 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.818181818 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178913497675 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812858919944 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639256671421 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126258285003 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544826620741 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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