Children must do community service when they are free because it will benefit them and their society. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that having children to take part in charitable services in their free time can have a remarkable impact on both the children themselves as well as their society. I entirely agree with this statement, and this essay will discuss the reasons for such an opinion.
Altruism, cooperation and time management all are great characteristics that every child should have, and nothing is better than community services to cater them to learn these traits. To illustrate, a recent survey conducted by the University of Singapore showed that parents, who corporate their children in community works, have experienced a significant change in the children’s behaviour in terms of giving a hand to their siblings, be more able to manage their time and more caring for their fosters.
In addition to this, society itself would greatly benefit from such considerable participation. To illustrate, integrating adolescence in useful activities in their free time can reduce the rate of crimes, hence leverages the rates of safety and stability in the society. For instance, in Egypt, a study by three socialists conducted that number of children being sent to the Juvenile Justice Center is decreasing since the government has applied a charity program as essential part at schools. Therefore, if community work is available, social stability will follow.
By way of conclusion, due to creating more responsible young people and avoiding tremendous harm to the society, it seems to me that children should share part of their free time serving their community. It is, thus, recommended that parents should elaborate on the vast number of merits of charitable services to their youngsters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... impact on both the children themselves as well as their society. I entirely agree with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2936802974 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95081125702 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1045005608 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236378139658 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873816705257 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456392829555 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145123212293 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276571403474 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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