New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers… To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons- Relevant examples.
It is true that consumers’ lives have greatly changed since the presence of modern technologies and recent purchasing and selling methods. I entirely agree with this statement, and this essay will delve in the reasons for such dramatic change.
Undoubtedly, new technologies, internet for example, have contributed to changing the life of the consumer into a more luxurious one. To illustrate, online shopping and delivery services have made it easy for everyone to order whatever they need from any part of the world, and all of this happens with the click of a few buttons. For instance, in the past, my mother used to do a lot of effort walking from one store to the other in order to compare between offers, while nowadays, I can make my purchases using my stores’ applications with no such effort.
In addition, new ways of buying and selling have guaranteed some flexibility and safety for consumers. For example, ought to plastic money, such as credit cards, customers not only are able to purchase their needs at any time, but they also are less susceptible to burglary crimes. In 2016, a survey of 1000 customers which conducted by the Times, showed that there is a significant decline in the rate of burglary among people who carry credit cards instead of cash money. Thus, if consumers seek both safety and flexibility during shopping, they should replace cash money with plastic one.
By way of conclusion, I reiterate that new technologies and modern ways of buying and selling have made some changes in peoples’ lives in terms of offering them fancy lifestyle as well as safety and affordability.
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| 2019-04-25 | Randa Agha | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98897058824 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80408198113 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0955651922 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.7 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189390352996 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797326080806 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620920523518 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132239146299 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626671132305 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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