Since population is rapidly increasing in the world, there is an acute shortage of houses in the big cities. Should we construct multistory buildings in the existing cities or should we develop suburbs and new cities in the countryside? Give your opinion.
Because of rapid growth in the population, there has been an acute shortage of living accommodation in the big cities. Since the big cities offer more job opportunities, many people from various places are attracted to them. Therefore, every available area in the big city is used to accommodate the rising population as well as the migrants. The migrant laborers occupy every vacant place in the big cities and set up slums there. It creates insanitary conditions, traffic jams and also causes shortage of water and electricity.
To solve this problem, some people suggest that multistory buildings should be built in the large cities. The high-rising buildings require less land their construction is less costly. They also provide compact and safe living. But multistory buildings have their own problems.Living there is full of noise, disturbance and interference. There is less privacy. These buildings are less airy and sunny, and also cause parking problems. They are also potential fire hazards. Moreover, more people means more vehicles and more pollution and traffic jams.
On the other hand, if we develop suburbs or new cities, they give us the feeling of independent and open living. Individual houses are airy and sunny.People can grow lawns and plant trees, and other plants which are good of environment and health. They can enjoy privacy and peace of mind. But the disadvantages are they decrease the agricultural land and forests, and are much more costlier than the multistory buildings.
In my opinion, developing new cities or suburbs is better than building the tall buildings. New cities can provide more facilities like wider roads, more green areas, and ample place for parking and other things. In new cities, the pollution levels are also less. There can also be 2-3 story cheap houses for the poor to avoid the development of slum areas. Such cities will solve the problem of the shortage of houses in the big cities and will also reduce the chaos in them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Living
...story buildings have their own problems.Living there is full of noise, disturbance and...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...g. Individual houses are airy and sunny.People can grow lawns and plant trees, and oth...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'costlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: costlier
...cultural land and forests, and are much more costlier than the multistory buildings. In my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10397553517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65715625877 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556574923547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0169118534 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8636363636 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8636363636 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299721687018 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735238306492 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068743120742 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160015274584 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579765304964 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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