Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Technological advancement in the world of medicine has made the human life-span much longer. Toddlers are recommended vaccination against life-threatening diseases. Many governments around the world, have enforced measures towards eradication of common viral illnesses through effective vaccines, especially in the formative years of a child. However, some people opine that this should be solely a decision of the parents. In this essay, I would like to discuss the merits and demerits of the legal obligations of vaccinating children.
Firstly, vaccination is a vital step towards safeguarding an infant from easily contactable ailments. Some governments have legally declared vaccination as an integral part of the child-healthcare. Parents are asked to immunize their child within a specific time period, to negate any chances of sickness. This is largely done in public interest to prevent any wide-spread epidemic and ensure better health.
Unfortunately, in certain cases, vaccinations may adversely affect a child’s body. A new-born infant has a weak immune system and can fall prey to deadly viruses rather easily. These viruses constantly mutate and thus, vaccines are constantly improvised and invented. Therefore, some parents prefer a prescribed vaccination from their own general physician, and ensure a suitable time frame to induce the vaccine. Sometimes, children can be too delicate to withhold the impact of vaccination.
Furthermore, parents believe that a personal examination of their baby’s health will determine a more suitable decision than following a ritual regularized by a legal body. People must be informed about the harmful effects of viral diseases and its preventive measures. Awareness and information on the side effects and the benefits of vaccines should be made available to all members of society for free.
In a nutshell, countries are striving hard towards providing free medical care. Hence, it is made compulsory for every parent to take the necessary steps and vaccinate their child to prevent an outbreak of an epidemic. A healthy nation is a wealthy nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6261682243 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10179330218 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638629283489 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8311616709 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.05 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200824995823 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522935710383 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427951643146 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105977143763 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261518227269 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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