Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?
Today science has developed so much that it can cure almost all diseases. However, the quote prevention is better than cure is still needed in the society. Many individuals consider that treatment of disease and conducting research on that cost many dollars as compare to preventing the same infection. In my opinion, I completely agree that preliminary steps are necessary to stop infections to proliferate.
Firstly, cost plays an essential role in treating diseases. Various medical organizations require huge amount of funds to treat deadly disease to save life and mostly poor countries depend on international aid to facilitate their hospital jobs. Therefore, while preventing such disease at initial steps can save a lot of money of government as well as of individuals, which can be utilized in our projects. For instance, In India, 30 percent of the government yearly budget involves the medical cost.
Secondly, eradication of infections before the spread can save life of many individuals. Many countries work on vaccination protocols which stops the infection to blowout from an infected individual and save others to get disease. For example, In India, government carry out various camps to make aware on preventive measures and maintain health by eating quality products as well as persuade them to get vaccinated and maintains the isolation of infected individuals.
In conclusion, research methods and treatment of disease involves huge amount of money in saving person’s life therefore the authorities should have more focus on preventive steps as compare to medicinal treatment. Hence, I believe that prevention is way more effective tool to minimize infections in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46037735849 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98927952805 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8389789244 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204833209611 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728377429353 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651556256698 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127978582196 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085569042431 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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