Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what Extant do you agree?
Today medical research and treatment are so costly that often people strongly suggest that we should prevent these diseases from occurring instead of treating them after happening. Up to certain extent, I agree with the above view but also think that we should continue our medical research to tackle some new diseases that have no treatments yet.
To begin with, it is not at all possible to prevent all diseases. Some of the developed countries are still suffering from poverty and often people eat unhygienic food so there are more chances of sickness among them. It is almost impossible task for any country to completely prevent these diseases. As a result, it would be always beneficial to treat them and do some research so that we can at least have some valid method and treatment for each and every illness. One best example of this has recently happened Ebola outbreak in Africa. No one had ever imagined it and it was quickly spread to some of the African countries. If we had proper research and treatment of this disease then we could save thousands of lives. So we should invest our time and money in the medical research and treatments to tackle such life-threatening illnesses.
On the other side, we should also take necessary steps to prevent these diseases. We all know that today medical treatment cost is so high that even middle-class person cannot afford it. Furthermore, some diseases progress to other people using various medium and as a result, it is really hard to stop them. Apart from this, by preventing diseases, we can save people from severe experiences of these diseases. One of the best examples of how we can prevent diseases is Polio. By proper, systematic, and well-defined plan, now most of the countries of the world become Polio free. Even India and China who are the world’s most populous nations also have got success on it.
In conclusion, medical research on diseases and preventing them from occurring, both have equal importance and we should equally focus on both areas to make our lives healthier, livable and enjoyable.
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| 2018-07-05 | shalom | 61 | view |
| 2017-05-18 | Moushumi Shema | 73 | view |
| 2017-05-18 | Moushumi Shema | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, still, then, well, apart from, as to, at least, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92897727273 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59954048456 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542613636364 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2150469352 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3888888889 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179387971651 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598120033264 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476580623568 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121632010649 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325068597189 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.